英语作文拜访朋友的写作要点：

开头

可以用简单的问候语开始，如 "Dear [Friend's Name]," 或 "Hello [Friend's Name],"。

简要说明拜访的原因，例如 "I came to visit you today because I haven't seen you for a while."

描述到达和见面

描述你如何到达朋友的家，例如 "I arrived at your place at [time] and knocked on the door."

描述朋友对你的到来有何反应，例如 "You were sleeping when I arrived, so I decided to wake you up."

活动内容

描述你们一起进行的活动，例如 "After getting up, we went outside and had a walk in the park."

可以提到一些具体的细节，例如 "We also watched a movie and had dinner together."

结束语

表达对这次拜访的愉快感受，例如 "I had a great time visiting you and I'm looking forward to our next meeting."

可以用一句简单的告别语结束，如 "Take care and see you soon."

其他

如果有必要，可以提到一些其他的信息，例如 "I brought you some gifts, which I hope you'll like."

Visiting My Friend

Dear [Friend's Name],

I came to visit you today because I haven't seen you for a while. I arrived at your place at 9 o'clock in the morning and knocked on the door. You were still asleep, so I decided to wake you up.

After getting up, we went outside and had a walk in the park. The weather was nice, and we enjoyed the fresh air and sunshine. We also watched a movie and had dinner together at your favorite restaurant.

I brought you some gifts, which I hope you'll like. It was great to catch up with you and I'm looking forward to our next meeting. Take care and see you soon.

Best regards,

[Your Name]

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